I hate stories that have too many adjectives and adverbs. It just pisses me off!!I am here and I am reading your stupid story and I can't get along with the actions because the adjectives keep bugging in my way."and then the small new round red Swiss plastic alarm clock started to ring loudly." I "love" this kind of writing SO much.
My cat died on Easter!!Stupid bunny came and killed my cat...I cried so much that day. I actually couldn't stop!! It was horrible!! It was like I was a different person. I don't cry!!Everyone knows that, but I guess I loved that cat too much.Oh and the funny thing is that no one and I mean NO ONE said "Happy Easter!" to me that morning even if they didn't know about Kyo.(my cellphone was dead)









-Chii
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N' I'm like, "Why you so Obsessed with me?" <3
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♪ ♪ " es ist ein Hund auf dem Rasen, Es regnet. Der Himmel ist grau. Ich sehe Blitz! Jetzt ist der Hund Angst. sollte ich ihn? kommen in mr. Hund!" ♪
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君の毒は私の心にとってハチミツの味がします
My english sucks, I apologize. Club ~darkboyfanclub =dragon-lovers
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~ This Blood On My Hands is Something I Cannot Forget ~
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lalala lalla la~*+*+
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·.·´¯`·.·The Beauty ·.·´¯`·.·
is in the eye of the beholder...
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